I feel it's been done
That's not to say this is no good, I suppose it's alright, but with David Firth's animations, you sort of used to that sort of humour (if you can call it that) and the voice doesn'e affect you as much.
It's as if you've tried to go over the top with the violence and randomness to try and better Firth's similar submissions. That, coupled with the poorer graphics, makes for a below standard flash. I just couldn't help the feeling that it was trying too hard at being something someone else has done.
The voices were good, really clear and easy to understand. It was pretty humourous when he'd try to say out a word he didn't quite know how to pronounce or what not.
But that's it really, it didn't send shivers down my spine or make me feel grossed out.
Keep up the hard work though, it's doubtless you put effort into this and I look foward to seeing more of your work.